Chat GPT–just another calculator, stick shift or spell check?

First three stories.

One.  When I took the SATs years ago, no calculators were allowed.  Square roots?  Do the time-consuming math in longhand.  Sine, cosine, and tangent?  Draw and label the triangles, write the formulas from memory (no formulas were given within the exam), and compute.  Today 55 minutes of the SAT allows calculators.  Some of the drudgery of the test has been eliminated.

Two.  When I learned to drive a car, I needed to learn and be tested on a stick shift.  I had to depress the clutch every time I changed a gear.  When starting uphill from a parked position, I needed to release the brake, depress the clutch and maneuver into first gear all in one quick, smooth motion or the car would stall.  But years later, I drove an automatic shift, and didn’t need to depress the clutch (there wasn’t any!) or shift gears or stress over getting into first gear going uphill.  It was so much easier.

Three.  A student wrote an essay and sent it to me online.  Squiggly lines suggested places where the software program perceived mistakes though it didn’t explain what the mistakes were.  The student clicked on each underlined word, and the software suggested corrections.  The student clicked on the suggested corrections, and the software instantly replaced the mistakes.  No dictionaries, no grammar handbooks, no need to even understand why the original mistake was wrong.

What do these stories have in common?  Technology—the kind which makes life easier.

The calculator makes computing math easier.  I still have to figure out what math to use and to input the numbers, but the calculating is done by a machine, freeing me for thinking.  An automatic transmission makes driving easier, allowing me to ignore the mechanics of driving so I can focus on the rules of driving and the actions of other vehicles.  Software backed by millions of data points and patterns  suggests writing corrections which usually are correct.

This brings me to Open AI’s Chat GPT, a controversial software which searches for patterns in millions and millions of word, grammar and sentence data.  As it finds patterns and incorporates them into its “brain,” Chat GPT becomes more and more able to suggest likely outcomes for various situations, including writing a student’s essay.

Like with the examples of technology above, Chat GPT technology makes it easier to do something—in this case, to write logically.  You can ask Chat GPT for a paragraph about many things you need written, and you can suggest a style and vocabulary, such as that of a fourth grader.  Chat GPT can do that.  It searches its vast database for vocabulary and description likely to be used in the sentences of a nine-year-old, and then it writes whatever you need.

Chat GPT is at an early stage of its development.  It needs the correct input of data to produce the desired output of writing.  It can describe accurately but it cannot “think” the way a human being can think.  It can tell what has happened, but it cannot predict.  It cannot tell you what won’t happen, or what won’t work.  If programmers corrupt the inputted data, the outputted product is corrupt—perhaps not true, perhaps using foul vocabulary, perhaps written in university academic vocabulary and sentence structure rather than those of a fourth grader.  (Garbage in, garbage out.)

We are already used to baby steps in this kind of technology, as when software offers suggestions for grammar or spelling.  Teachers use this kind of help for their own writing, so they are likely to allow it for their students’ writing as well.  So why then the bru-ha-ha about Chat GPT?

Chat GPT goes beyond suggesting a synonym or a different spelling; Chat GPT can write the whole essay.  And often teachers cannot tell the difference.  Is it so different from the following story?

A college business student took an English writing class from me.  I questioned him about a paper he turned in because it seemed much better written than the student’s in-class assignments.  “Oh, I gave it to my father’s secretary, and she fixed it,” he said.  “Fixed it?”  “Well, mostly she wrote it,” he said.  He justified the situation by saying he worked for his father, and would inherit the business, and would always have a secretary to write for him.  “I don’t need to know how to write,” he said,  I explained this to the academic dean.  “Let it go,” she said.  The student graduated from a four-year college though he couldn’t write a coherent paragraph.

Is Chat GPT giving our students the latest iteration of a calculator, a stick shift, or spell check?  Or is Chat GPT giving students their own online secretaries–leveling the playing field for students who don’t have their father’s secretary to write their papers?  Is Chat GPT a bad thing?  Does it matter?

 

One easy way to improve your writing:  Read it aloud

When students and I revise their writing, the first thing I ask them to do is to read their draft aloud.  New-to-me students balk at this.  “Oh, that’s all right,” they tell me.  “You can read it.”

girl with pony tail on floor writing“No, you read it,” I say, attempting to instill in them this habit.  I have asked them to read aloud before our lesson, but they haven’t.  I can tell they haven’t read aloud previously because they stop in the middle of sentences, pause, and then make changes in their draft.

They are hearing mistakes with their ears that they don’t see with their eyes.

What kinds of mistakes do they hear?  Errors that sound wrong, even if sometimes they are grammatically correct.  These include

  • Long sentences that contain so much information that the student writer gets lost.
  • Sentences that have been revised but still contain some of the no-longer-needed words.
  • Confusing pronouns, such as when the writing is about two boys, and he writer uses “he” and “him” over and over without identifying the boys by their names.

What kinds of mistakes don’t they hear?  Visual errors are hard to hear.  These include

  • Homophones (words which sound the same but are spelled differently, such as pair and pear).
  • Spelling errors (such as reading “hoping” as “hopping”).
  • Run-on sentences separated by a comma, especially if the second clause begins with a subject pronoun.

Reading aloud doesn’t lead to finding all errors, but I have rarely worked with a student who doesn’t find at least one error when reading aloud.

Should ChatGPT be banned from use in schools?

The New York City schools thinks so.  It has banned the new artificial intelligence writing tool from its school computers.  So have the Seattle Public Schools, the Los Angeles Unified School District, Fairfax County Public Schools in Virginia and Montgomery County Public Schools in Alabama.  All fear ChatGPT will be used by students to do their assignments.

Before we continue, what is ChatGPT?  It is a form of artificial intelligence (AI) launced in November by OpenAI, a San Francisco-based company.  ChatGPT, a free service,  can write essays on demand, solve problems, code, generate discussions and offer students tips on how to revise their writing.  It can compose paragraphs in the style of a fourth grader or write sonnets in the style of Robert Frost so well that experts can’t tell that AI wrote them.  And that is the problem.

If students use this AI tool to do their school work, will students learn?  But perhaps that is not the best question to ask.  ChatGPT is free, it’s out there, and more and better tools like it are in the works.  Can schools really stop students from using such AI?  Should they?

I think it is a hopeless pursuit.  Here’s why.

  • Though schools can ban or disable ChatGPT on school computers, they can’t ban it on students’ personal computers or cell phones or tablets. Outside of school, students can use ChatGPT to do school assignments.  How is a teacher to know?
  • Programs claiming to be able to detect AI-written work so far aren’t foolproof. And with more AI-programs in the pipeline, will such programs be able to keep up?
  • English teachers—who already work some of the longest hours of any teachers—will not want to add to their burden by checking student assignments for AI-composed paragraphs, essays, arguments, and data.

Since AI is here to stay, instead of banning ChatGPT and tracking down cheaters, schools better might invest in how to use it to teachers’ advantage. Since the technology is so new, accommodating it (rather than banning it) this semester will be difficult for most school districts.  However, if schools designate personnel to study ChatGPT, and develop practices teachers can use during the next school year, schools can use AI as another teaching tool, one tech-savvy students will embrace.

If you want to try ChatGPT,

  • On your computer,  go to chat.openai.com  You will be asked for your email and phone number to which codes will be sent in order to proceed.
  • On your Android smart phone, go to your web browser and key in chat.openai.com.
  • ChatGPT is not available on Apple phones since OpenAI is a Microsoft-backed enterprise.

 

A lily by any other name. . .

The other day I heard Prince Harry refer to his daughter as “Lily,” the nickname for her legal name, Lilibet, which is itself a nickname for her namesake, Queen Elizabeth II.  The origins of the word Lily refer to a flower, while the origins of Elizabeth refer to “oath” and “God” in Hebrew.  Interesting, isn’t it, how one name leads to another?

Lily’s grandfather, Charles, is known as Carlos in Spanish-language countries and Karl in German and Russian-language countries.  Prince William is Guillermo in Spanish, Guillaume in French, and Wilhelm in German, but William in Russian since there is no translation of William into Russian.

Many European countries refer to the British family members by their English names even if there is an easy translation.

Prince Harry is usually called Harry in the European press, even though his formal name, Henry, can be translated into Henrique in Spanish, Enrico in Italian and Henri in French.  His wife, Meghan, has no equivalent for her English name in most other languages.  Camilla is a tough one to translate, too.

In my own family there was a quandary about what to call me.  My mother wanted to name me after her mother, Catherine, but she wanted to honor my father’s Irish heritage.  So I was named Kathleen.  If I made the news, would I be called Catalina in Spanish, Caterina in Italian, Ekaterina in Russian, or Catherine in French?  Happily, a moot point.

Writers should be aware of names we choose for our characters.  J. K. Rowling certainly thought about Harry Potter’s name:  both Harry and Potter are common, under-the-radar long-time English names perfect for a boy who lives in a closet under the stairs.  Snape, a sinister character, has a name sounding like “snake.”  Malfoy means bad (mal) faith (foy), ideal for the student who tries to thwart Harry.  And Valdemort, derived from vol (flight) de (from) mort (death), perfectly fits an evil wizard fighting to stay alive.

Jane Austen chose solid English names for most of her major characters (Charles appears over and over, as do Jane and Elizabeth).  Shakespeare chose Mercurcio for his hot-headed, walk-away-lover in Romeo and Juliet.

Sometimes editors choose names when authors’ choices seem off.  Scarlett O’Hara in Gone with the Wind was originally called “Violet,” too sweet and timid a name for the firey heroine in Margaret Mitchell’s classic.  Mitchell named her male lead character aptly though:  Rhett brings to mind “rat.”

 

Two typical writing problems for middle schoolers and how a tutor overcomes them

Problem 1:  A seventh grader is writing a narrative about the first day of the new semester.  She starts her story by recounting how her alarm rang.  Then, lying in bed, she worries about two new teachers she would meet that day.  Next, she writes that she goes downstairs, eats breakfast, dresses and takes the bus to school.  Once in school, she grabs her texts from her locker, talks to a friend,  heads to her first class, and meets one of her new teachers.

“Do you need that part about going downstairs, eating, taking the bus, and going to your locker?” I ask her.

“Well, yeah.  How else do I show that I go to school?”

“Could you write about waking up and being nervous to meet your new teacher, and then jump to the part where the teacher meets you, saying ‘Welcome to our math class, Cara.’?”

“No, because how will the readers know who is talking and that it is later that day?”

“Okay.  Could you say, ‘Cara, is it?’ my new teacher said as I walked in the classroom an hour later.”

“You mean I don’t need to say all the in-between stuff?”

“That’s right.”  I suggest she cut and paste her paragraphs about eating, riding the bus and going to her locker to the bottom of the narrative for now while she thinks more about it.

She does, hesitantly.  A little later, she deletes that part.  “I guess I don’t need it after all.”

Problem 2:  But I can’t write, “’Cara, is it?’” my new teacher said as I walked in the classroom an hour later” because it’s only one sentence, and every paragraph needs five sentences.”

“No, it doesn’t.  Look at any book and count the number of sentences in each paragraph.  Lots will have only one sentence, and others will have seven or ten or even a fragment.”

She picked up a book and opened it and counted sentences.  She closed the book.  “But then why do my teachers say I need to write five sentences in each paragraph?”

“That’s to encourage you to write more.”

“You mean there’s no rule?”

“No.”

“Oh.”

She left the one-sentence paragraph on her page, and followed it by another one-sentence paragraph.

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Sometimes working with a writing tutor means dispelling myths, like the five-sentence paragraph or needing to write a “before” to a story instead of jumping right in.  Sometimes working with a writing tutor means making mistakes repeatedly, like forgetting to use apostrophes or using texting abbreviations, and asking for help.  Sometimes working with a writing tutor means trying stylistic changes, like adding dialog or figurative language.  Sometimes working with a writing tutor means experimenting with vocabulary the student has not written before.

Do you know a student who could use one-on-one writing instruction?  Tell that student’s parent about me.  I tutor writing to students, second grade to high school,  online.  Together students and I plan, organize, write first drafts, and revise, noting why each step in the process is important.  Writing well is like playing the piano well or kicking a soccer ball well.  It takes practice.  And with a knowledgeable coach or tutor, a student improves faster.