Too bad school’s not in session. Retorts by Congressmen to President Trump’s remarks about President Putin would make a great vocabulary lesson, tying current events (of interest to students) to vocabulary (of lesser interest).
Using direct quotes could happen any time a current event brings forth a slew of comments. Even events from history and the responses of the people of the time could be used. What could the writing lessons be?
- Define ten of the words as used in the sentences and then use them in your own unrelated sentences.
- Select ten of the words and write a narrative / editorial / news story /poem using those words properly.
- Create a multiple choice test. Use the quoted sentence as the prompt and then underline one word per sentence and offer four choices identifying the correct meaning.
- Write a persuasive essay saying which remark is the most persuasive or the most polarizing or the most noncommittal.
Here are some of the comments from a week ago. (The underlines are my own.)
Senator Susan Collins of Maine: [The president’s] position is untenable.
Senator Ben Sasse of Nebraska: When the president plays these moral equivalence games, he gives Putin a propaganda win he desperately needs.
Senator Jerry Moran of Kansas: The problem is. . .Russia’s duplicitous behavior.
Rep. Cathy McMorris Rodgers of Washington: The president must hold Russia accountable for their adversarial actions and their continued efforts to undermine our democratic institutions.
Senator Richard M. Burr of North Carolina: the United States will not tolerate hostile Russian activities against us or our allies.
Senator Roy Blunt of Missouri: [Putin] is a calculating adversary who is trying to exert all the influence he can anywhere he can.
Senator John Cornyn of Texas: I think [Trump is] conflating different things — the meddling and the collusion allegations for which there does not appear to be any evidence.
Senator James Lankford of Oklahoma: We must unequivocally denounce Russia’s election interference attempts.
Senator John McCain of Arizona: No prior president has ever abased himself more abjectly before a tyrant.
When parents ask for writing help for their children, what kind of help do they want?
- Sentence structures?
- Introductions and hooks?
- Cursive handwriting?
- Particular types of writing (paragraphs? essays? book reports? short answer responses? long answer responses? summaries?)
- Narrative elements (character development? plot? setting? foreshadowing? point of view? conflict? dialog? voice? suspense?)
- Verb tenses?
- Figures of speech?
Most parents have no idea so many elements combine to create good writing. When they see a list like this, they are taken aback.
That is why it is important for parents and teachers to agree on what students should learn at various ages. If a parent thinks the student should be perfecting grammar, but the teacher instead focuses on organization of information, the parent will not be happy. Or if a parent thinks a student should be using a great piece of rhetoric as a model, but the teacher wants the student to develop his own way of expression, again the parent will be dissatisfied.
Only when a parent is aware of all that a student is expected to learn can the parent and teacher have a meaningful conversation about how to improve a student’s writing.
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I was working with a high school freshman writing an essay. He was baffled by his teacher’s directions to write a chicken foot and buckets. So was I. There was a drawing of a horizontal line with three diagonal “toes” going out from the end of the horizontal line. This was the chicken foot. There was another drawing of four cans with a space for a label at the top of each one. These were the buckets. But there was no identification of what these terms or diagrams meant.
Emails back and forth solved the problem. The chicken foot was the thesis. The horizontal line was the opinion and the three toes were the supporting ideas backing up the thesis. The buckets were the details for each of the chicken’s toes, with an extra one in case.
The more I thought about these terms, though, the more annoyed I became. Why not use the terminology that the student will need to use in other high school English classes and in college classes? Why not call a thesis a thesis and its supporting topic sentences supporting topic sentences? Why not call evidence “evidence” or “citations”?
What my student’s teacher is doing is what so many parents do for babies learning to talk. The parents say “night-night” instead of “sleep” or “bye-bye” instead of “we’re leaving.” But eventually the children need to learn the proper names for “sleep” and “leaving.” Why introduce “baby” versions of the words? Isn’t “sleep” just as easy to understand as “night-night”?
I know the teacher is well meaning. And I know she explained “chicken foot” and “buckets” during class. But my student didn’t understand, and looking up those words on the teacher handout didn’t help. If the teacher had used the word “thesis,” he could have looked that word up and found plenty of explanation. If she had used the words “topic sentences” or “supporting topic sentences,” he could have found those words and their meanings online. If she had used the words “evidence” or “citations,” my student could have figured out what they meant and what he was expected to do.
Children eventually need to learn proper vocabulary for ideas, whether it is “identify” or “cite.” Babying their vocabulary does no service to children; rather it confuses them and stalls their acquisition of adult vocabulary.
Several dictionaries announced their “word of the year” as 2017 closed. Here are their choices, in no particular order.
Youthquake: “a significant cultural, political, or social change arising from the actions or influence of young people.” Oxford Dictionaries (British)
Complicit: “choosing to be involved in an illegal or questionable act, especially with others.” Dictionary.com
Feminism: “the theory of the political, economic, and social equality of the sexes” and “organized activity on behalf of women’s rights and interests.” Merriam-Webster Dictionary (American)
Fake News: “false, often sensational information disseminated under the guise of news reporting.” Collins Dictionary (British)
Another word to consider is “whatever,” not as a choice for word of the year but for the ninth consecutive year, as Americans choice for the most annoying word, according to the annual Marist Poll. “Fake news” came in second.
Teachers and tutors, do you want to save time and get double or triple use from the same source? Use your students’ vocabulary workbook to teach writing.
Many of my students use the Wordly Wise 3000 series (which I recommend). It has 20 lessons per booklet, one booklet per grade, first through twelfth. In each lesson is an annotated list of new vocabulary words plus exercises using the words.
Like other vocabulary building series, each lesson also has a reading selection in which each new vocabulary word is used. These reading selections are followed by many questions asking the student to use one of the new vocabulary words in a complete sentence answer.
But other ways to use the vocabulary and reading selections augment their original purpose and make them valuable as writing tools. Here are some I have used.
- Summarizing. I teach students to underline the most important or key words in each paragraph. Next, I show how to analyze each paragraph and to write an identification in the margin next to the paragraph. Those phrases might be “dodo bird’s appearance,” “raising $ for Statue of Liberty base,” or “Renaissance dates and definition.” Then, using the underlines and margin information, I teach the student to write a summary of each paragraph in about one or two sentences. When he is done, he has a good summary of the reading selection.
- Paraphrasing. Taking one sentence at a time, I ask students to rewrite the sentence, keeping the meaning but changing the sentence structure and, where possible, the vocabulary.
- Writing RACE responses. I write a question based on the article. Then I ask the student to respond using the RACE format (Repeat the question, Answer the question, Cite part of the article used as evidence, and Elaborate on that evidence with more evidence).
- Writing sentences using new vocabulary words. So many times students can define a word but they cannot use it properly in a sentence. I ask them to write sentences using vocabulary words. This shows their weakness in understanding certain words and helps me to explain the words better to them.
- Writing paragraphs using new vocabulary words. I ask students to write each new word in a coherent paragraph or two. Writing a paragraph takes more skill than writing independent sentences. Not only does the student need to know how to use the word, but he needs to know its noun, adjective and verb forms and whether it is the best word in a given situation. Forming a coherent whole takes imagination and hard work.
- Writing narratives. Put a person or animal into the nonfiction situation in the reading passage and write about it. What if you were a dodo bird encountering your first human being? What if you were a Cherokee forced to say good-bye to your land in North Carolina and trek toward the unknown? What if you were Leonardo’s apprentice, entrusted to carry the rolled up canvas of the Mona Lisa from Florence to France?
If you are teaching children to write, you know that coming up with a writing topic is tedious. But by using the reading selections from the vocabulary workbooks, the subject matter is identified, the student has prior knowledge, and the vocabulary words are identified.
There is no need to reinvent the wheel.
Words can be divided into four kinds, according to a popular business writing blogger.* Let me paraphrase his four kinds of words:
- Common words, or everyday words that you can expect your reading audience to know without explanation.
- Jargon, or words specific to the field you are writing about. If you are writing about math, for example, you might use “function” and “algorithm,” and expect your audience to understand. But for new or unusual math words, or for children, you would offer definitions.
- 50-cent words, usually with many syllables or from another language. These words are intended to impress people or to act as shibboleths showing that the writer is an insider. Such words could include “esprit de corps,” “modicum,” and “Neolithic.”
- Unusual words which hook or delight a reader. Such words might include “pique” and “hardscrabble,” or for a young child, “triceratops” or “tyrannosaurus.”
How often should you or your students use each type of word? According to the business blogger,
- Common words—90 percent of the time
- Jargon—as needed for your topic, but be sure to define new or rarely heard words
- Unusual words—just a little bit
When teaching writing to children, I find that they stick to the commonest of common words unless they are prodded to try new words.. To expand their vocabularies, I suggest what to them seem like 50-cent words. If they have heard a word before, they might try it out, but if they haven’t heard it, they prefer to stick to comfortable, overused words.
Children who come from enriched backgrounds have large common word vocabularies. Children from impoverished backgrounds have small common word vocabularies. What can seem like a common word to one kindergartener can bewilder another. It’s important for children’s writing to sound like their own writing, not their teacher’s, so their backgrounds need to be considered if you attempt to stretch their vocabularies with new words.
However, when writing about a particular topic, children need to use the precise vocabulary of that topic. Words like “pollution” and “predator” should be expected when talking about the environment. Even though these words might seem strange at first, their precision is what makes them useful. Children need to use the correct names of concepts.
As for unusual words, I encourage children to use one or two to add sparkle to their writing. Often their “unusual” is my “ordinary,” but if using a particular word delights a child, I encourage it.
A thesaurus is a book or online source for finding synonyms and antonyms of words. Here is how a thesaurus can improve your writing.
- A thesaurus can suggest a variety of words to replace a generic or overused word. For example, the word “ran” can mean “raced,” “rushed” and “hurried.”
- A thesaurus can offer a more precise word to replace a general word. For example, “ran” can mean “sprinted,” “loped” or “leaped.”
- A thesaurus can offer nuances for words which have shades of meaning. For example, “to run” a business can mean “to regulate,” “to manage” or to “carry on.”
- A thesaurus can jump start your brain with words you might not have considered. For example, “to run into debt” can mean “to incur” or “to acquire” debt.
But using a thesaurus can lead to problems.
- Since not all synonyms for the same word are synonyms for each other, you must be sure of the meaning of a suggested word before you use it. Using a dictionary to find the precise meaning of a thesaurus-suggested word is a way to avoid this problem.
- Some synonyms can sound pretentious when you want to write simply, or some synonyms can sound casual or even childlike when you want to write seriously. If you are writing fiction, a long word in the mouth of a child can sound ridiculous. So can a slang word in the mouth of a courtroom attorney.
- Some synonyms can sound unnatural for you, the writer. For example, I tend to write using short words of Anglo-Saxon origin, so long Latinate words sound wrong for my writing style. Sometimes I look up a synonym and decide that the simple word I started out with is the best choice.
One more word on thesauruses. (Or is it thesauri?) Different kinds exist, ranging from a children’s thesaurus with pictures and limited words (meant for a beginning reader and writer) to an adult thesaurus (meant for fourth or fifth graders and older).
For serious writers, I recommend the Roget’s International Thesaurus. This thesaurus is a two-part version, requiring you to look up a word (such as run) and then decide on the general meaning you are seeking. When you find that meaning, you go to a different part of the book for a more detailed list of synonyms. Compared to a one-step thesaurus, the results of this two-step thesaurus—precision, nuances and sheer number of synonyms—are superior but more time-consuming.