PEE (Point, Evidence, Explain) is term to describe how paragraphs in persuasive writing should be developed. It comes from research at the University of Arizona by Dr. Anne-Marie Hall who called it PIE (Point, Illustration, Explanation). Paragraphs developed this way form good body paragraphs of persuasive writing.
Using this format, students write an opening topic sentence. They follow it with facts to back it up. Lastly, they connect the topic sentence and facts, analyzing how the facts support the topic sentence.
PEE is a method used in elementary grades to prepare students for persuasive writing. Older students will use the same kind of logic in writing a thesis and in locating good research to cite to back a thesis. PEE also teaches children the importance of facts such as names, numbers, and precise quotations if they want their opinions to be respected.
Here is a break-down of what PEE means, using and example that fourth graders could write:
P stands for Point, the point you are making in your answer to a question. This point is made in a single sentence. For example, the question could be, “Are you having a spelling test today?” Your answer (point) could be, “Yes, I am having a spelling test today.
E stands for Evidence, the facts or examples that prove your point. This evidence consists of facts such as numbers, dates, precise names, sources, and direct quotations. For example, the evidence could be 1) It is Friday, and my teacher, Mrs. Spilling, always gives spelling tests on Friday. 2) Mrs. Spilling posted on September 23 on her school website (MrsBSpilling@ABCschool.edu) that my class is having a spelling test today. 3) My mother heard me my spelling words at 7:30
last night the way she always does the night before my spelling tests.
The second E stands for Explain. That means to connect the point and the evidence. For example, So because today is Friday, and my teacher, Mrs. Spilling posted on her website on Tuesday, September 23 that my class would have a spelling test today, and because my mother heard me my spelling words last night, I know I am having a spelling test today.
(A related idea which I have discussed previously in this blog is the sandwich method of introducing a quotation/citation into writing.)
The PEE or PIE format is not used for essay introductions or conclusions. It shows a way to develop body paragraphs.





