Common Core Standards are influencing how our children learn to read and write

In 2009 the state governors and commissioners of education in the US began creating what has become known as the Common Core Standards—goals to better the education of our public school students as they go through school, year by year, and in the basic courses of high school. The best practices in use around the US and the world were culled to create these standards using teacher, parent and expert advice. Forty-three states have adopted these standards and have begun the process of implementing them within their borders.

Controversy abounds, especially criticism that the standards demand too much of students. Two states backed out of the standards after adopting them.

The Common Core initiatives are striving to “level the playing field” among states, giving students in poorly performing states the same goals and criteria for measurement of success as students in better performing states.

States ranked by the quality of the education they offer studentsEach adopting state’s department of education figured out its own way to use these standards. In Georgia, where I live, end-of-year tests known as the Georgia Milestones were developed for grades three to eight, and end-of course tests were developed for certain high school math, English, science and social studies courses. These tests must account for 20 percent of a student’s final grade.

In the Georgia English Language Arts courses, 53 percent of the test grade is based on reading and vocabulary, and 47 percent is based on writing and other language arts criteria. The tests consist of

• multiple choice questions;

• open-ended questions (where the student must supply an answer not suggested in the test question);

• a narrative which the student must read, followed by a prompt which the student must answer by writing several sentences, using information from the narrative; and

• two narratives on a single subject which the student must read, followed by a prompt to which the student must answer with an essay-like response.

The Georgia English Language Arts test questions test four levels of knowledge:

• recall of information—knowing the facts;

• basic reasoning—describing and explaining;

• complex reasoning—justifying how and why by applying evidence from experience or from reading passages; and

• extended reasoning—connecting and relating ideas and providing evidence.

Although Georgia’s English Language Milestone tests vary from tests used in other states, all the tests demand the following from students:

• close reading of a text, meaning going beneath the surface of a reading passage or book to look for deeper meaning;

• finding and examining textual evidence, meaning answering questions based on what the text says, not on what a student thinks is true;

• supplying textual proof (page number, paragraph number, source);

• answering specific, thought-provoking questions which are dependent on the text; and

• using academic vocabulary.

Publishing student essays is essential

Most writing that a student does is seen by two people only—himself and his teacher. Sometimes the writing goes home and parents see it. But rarely do fellow students or friends see student writing. Rarely is there a real world audience.

Professional writers write for an audience. It may be tightly focused—a blog for race car enthusiasts—or it might be more widespread—Reader’s Digest readers. For students to do their best—for them to want to produce the best writing possible—publishing is essential.

EPSON MFP imageWhat is considered publishing for a student?

  • Hanging a finished essay on the refrigerator at home.
  • Photocopying the finished essay and mailing it to Grandma.
  • Scanning the finished essay into the computer and emailing it to aunts and uncles or former teachers.
  • Using the finished essay as Mom’s screen saver.
  • Putting a finished copy in a three-ring binder in a classroom or tutoring center for other students and parents to read.
  • Putting the finished essay online in a student blog or teacher’s blog of student writing.
  • Putting it online in a “great essays” section of a teacher’s classroom work.
  • Entering it in writing in contests.

Publishing matters. Professional writers don’t write for a grade. They write to be read. Too few students have this opportunity. But when they do, it motivates them to write better. At a tutoring center where I teach writing, students crowd around the binder bursting with finished student work. They mention what they have read to each other, or sometimes they try their own hand at the same kind of writing as their friend has written. I point this out to the students whose work has inspired other students, and they grin ear to ear.

Parents, too, read the writing of students. They look for students in the same grade as their child to see what other children of that age are writing. They read with pride their child’s work among other children’s work. They also read for the sheer pleasure of reading good writing.

Printed essays make students feel like professional writers

Rarely do students see their own writing printed unless they type it up themselves. That is why I type and print final drafts for them. They compare their handwritten drafts to the printed drafts in wonder.

This is the moment when they realize they are writers.

Smile, page 1, written draft 001

Above is a prewriting organizer in the form of a time line which a sixth grader used to write about events in a book she read. What follows are the two-page revised first draft and finally, the typed draft.

 

Smile, page 2 001

Handwritten revised draft of student essay

Handwritten revised draft of a student’s essay

Typed version of student's essay

Typed version of a student’s essay

When I type student essays on my computer, I print two final versions. One is for the student to take home, attached to the earlier, revised drafts, the list of verbs, the math showing the number of words per sentence and the range, and the mind web or other prewriting organizer. This package of papers shows a paper trail from the development of ideas through revision and the final draft. Parents can look over the changes the student has made to his essay and discover what the student already knows—that writing is a step-by-step process.

The other printed version I use for publishing. More about that in the next blog.

How to edit an essay

Because my students’ first drafts are so messy, I sometimes ask them to rewrite them during the revising stage. Many students make clean drafts without my encouragement since they have no room left for changes or since they can hardly decipher their changes any more.

I have learned that when students try to edit using a sloppy, revised draft with cross-outs and insertions, they miss errors.  Even though they have skipped lines to leave room for changes, and have left margins so there is room for insertions, sometimes they need to write a clean draft or type and print  a clean draft for editing purposes.

student essay to be edited

This portion of a fifth grade student essay has been revised but is difficult to edit because of all the cross-outs, circles and insertions. A clean draft would help the student to edit well.

Once they have a clean almost-final draft, students edit. They read every word of their essays, looking for errors such as in spelling, capitalization, verb tenses, plurals, parallel structure, subject-verb agreement, pronoun antecedent agreement, possessive nouns, its and it’s; they’re, there, and their; to, two, and too; and punctuation. Students who overuse certain words (and, then, so, and just, for example) hunt for them and either eliminate them or replace them.

One trick I learned long ago when I was a copy editor is to read each sentence out of order, starting with the last sentence and ending with the first sentence. By listening to sentences out of order, mistakes are easier to hear. My students think this technique is silly until they try it, but then they realize its usefulness. Usually I wait until a student is in middle school to suggest this editing technique.

As students edit, I try to read along with them, to suggest grammar and usage problems they might not suspect. At this point I sometimes teach a grammar lesson on the particular problem the student has encountered, especially if this problem is recurring.

When the student finishes editing his final hand-written copy, the student or I type this draft on the computer, leaving any remaining errors as they are. At our next meeting, the student edits for a second time, usually finding a handful of errors he missed during the first edit. (It’s so much easier to find errors when the writing is printed rather than hand-written.) Sometimes the student will make significant changes at this point, but not usually. Since I am aware of what the errors are, I point out errors that the student has not found.

Next we’ll talk about the value of typing and printing a final version of a student’s essay.

Clueless student writers benefit from a fill-in-the-blanks book report form

Although a specific prewriting organizer for a book review (see last week’s blog) is sufficient help for some writers to get going, for other students, this is not enough. “Yeah, but how do I begin?” they ask after they have filled in the boxes of the organizer.

For them, I use a fill-in-the-blanks book review. It looks like this:
Form fill-in-the-blanks book report


Form fill-in-the-blanks book report
When students have filled in the blanks I ask the students to read the black typed parts and their own words aloud, listening for mistakes. Together we correct the mistakes.

Then I either accept the book review as is, or I ask the students to rewrite it on a different sheet of paper, using the black typed parts and their own words but leaving out the red directions. Rewriting the fill-in-the-blanks sheet strengthens the features of a book review in the students’ minds so I see this as a useful task. Plus it prepares the student for revising in the future.

A fill-in-the-blanks book review form is a crutch for primary school students and ESL students who don’t know what is expected in a book report. After students use it a few times and become comfortable with its features, I ask them to look at it while they write their reviews, but to write their reviews on a different sheet of paper. Eventually, as they become more confident writers, they no longer need it.