I was working with a high school freshman writing an essay. He was baffled by his teacher’s directions to write a chicken foot and buckets. So was I. There was a drawing of a horizontal line with three diagonal “toes” going out from the end of the horizontal line. This was the chicken foot. There was another drawing of four cans with a space for a label at the top of each one. These were the buckets. But there was no identification of what these terms or diagrams meant.
Emails back and forth solved the problem. The chicken foot was the thesis. The horizontal line was the opinion and the three toes were the supporting ideas backing up the thesis. The buckets were the details for each of the chicken’s toes, with an extra one in case.
The more I thought about these terms, though, the more annoyed I became. Why not use the terminology that the student will need to use in other high school English classes and in college classes? Why not call a thesis a thesis and its supporting topic sentences supporting topic sentences? Why not call evidence “evidence” or “citations”?
What my student’s teacher is doing is what so many parents do for babies learning to talk. The parents say “night-night” instead of “sleep” or “bye-bye” instead of “we’re leaving.” But eventually the children need to learn the proper names for “sleep” and “leaving.” Why introduce “baby” versions of the words? Isn’t “sleep” just as easy to understand as “night-night”?
I know the teacher is well meaning. And I know she explained “chicken foot” and “buckets” during class. But my student didn’t understand, and looking up those words on the teacher handout didn’t help. If the teacher had used the word “thesis,” he could have looked that word up and found plenty of explanation. If she had used the words “topic sentences” or “supporting topic sentences,” he could have found those words and their meanings online. If she had used the words “evidence” or “citations,” my student could have figured out what they meant and what he was expected to do.
Children eventually need to learn proper vocabulary for ideas, whether it is “identify” or “cite.” Babying their vocabulary does no service to children; rather it confuses them and stalls their acquisition of adult vocabulary.